Bikes In School

I found it easy to remember all the things I learned from training like my A,B,C,D and Q.

I found it hard to remember what Q stands for in the elfebet and what it means.

Next time I will talk more about bike riding and about more safety information.

Hi I and room three have been learning how to keep safe on our bikes, the first thing you should do before going on a bike is getting the right helmet thats your size, when you get your bike you should always know the elfebet which is like A,B,C,D and Q, A is for air check to see if there is enough ear in you tires to go bike riding B is for brakes make s   you check your brakes or you might end up crashing into someone C is for chain if you have a bike and your chain is rusty or old buy a new one all ways check you chain rubb your, finger on the chain to see if its greezy if it is then you can rub your finger agenst the grass to get the greez off of your finger and Q is for quick adjustment.

Please this is just for you to remember use the alfebet and don't be silly on the road off track, because if your off road and you didn't do the check then its might not be safe to go bike riding, and when your on the road keep to the left for othere bikers to overtake you and when you go bike riding always keep your to fingers on the brake just incase theres a crash coming,and always pull both brakes for you to slow down steep hills or you will hurt yourself.

 

Nga Tae Colours In Maori

 The thing I found easy was to remember some of the colours from when I was a year 1.

The thing I found hard was to spell the maori words of the colours because I don't know how to spell some of them.

Next time I will add some photos and some pictures that match with the colours and put them in groups.

My writing goal and what makes a good recount

The thing I found easy was to work with my buddy Tilly, because she gave me some ideas around what would be good for a recount.

The thing I found hard was to remember what kind of things that made my recounts good and how it was good.

The thing I found challeneging was to know what the good things to know that people put in there recounts.

Next time I will try and remember more ideas that make a recount good.

My writing goal is to put more words and punctuation.

The ten things that make a recount good is things like punctuation adjectives and nouns, another thing that makes a recount good is telling the reader how you feel and how it happened when telling the reader about what happened and other stuff like adding punctuation and telling the teacher what you mean by adding more information.

-Punctuation

-Nouns,Adejectives,Onomatopoeia,Pronoun

-Different ideas in each paragraphs

-Telling the reader what happened

-When,what,who,why,how

-Spelling corrected

-Planning 

-painting a picture for the readers mind

-focusing on work

-brainstorm about what your gonna write about your recount for some ideas