In team toroa we have been learning how to write an acrostic poem about guy fawkes, our teachers brang sparklers to school to help us get some ideas of what fireworks sound like smell like, when getting ideas from the sparklers I thought the sparkler was talking to me with a sizziling sound.
I found it easy to find a perfect word to make a poem with which was fireworks because I thought it would be great.
I found it hard to put exciting words into my poem because I had so much ideas to put in.
Next time I will add more detail to my poem and to my stems because theres not really alot to write about fireworks because its just people letting off fireworks.
I found easy to remember way back to what happened on the train and who was on the train with me.
I found it hard to write about the train because I had other ideas about what I can write about and what I can describe more about.
Next time I will add more describing words into my recount writing and writing sample.
I found it easy to remember all the things I learned from training like my A,B,C,D and Q.
I found it hard to remember what Q stands for in the elfebet and what it means.
Next time I will talk more about bike riding and about more safety information.
Hi I and room three have been learning how to keep safe on our bikes, the first thing you should do before going on a bike is getting the right helmet thats your size, when you get your bike you should always know the elfebet which is like A,B,C,D and Q, A is for air check to see if there is enough ear in you tires to go bike riding B is for brakes make s you check your brakes or you might end up crashing into someone C is for chain if you have a bike and your chain is rusty or old buy a new one all ways check you chain rubb your, finger on the chain to see if its greezy if it is then you can rub your finger agenst the grass to get the greez off of your finger and Q is for quick adjustment.
Please this is just for you to remember use the alfebet and don't be silly on the road off track, because if your off road and you didn't do the check then its might not be safe to go bike riding, and when your on the road keep to the left for othere bikers to overtake you and when you go bike riding always keep your to fingers on the brake just incase theres a crash coming,and always pull both brakes for you to slow down steep hills or you will hurt yourself.
The thing I found easy was to work with my buddy Tilly, because she gave me some ideas around what would be good for a recount.
The thing I found hard was to remember what kind of things that made my recounts good and how it was good.
The thing I found challeneging was to know what the good things to know that people put in there recounts.
Next time I will try and remember more ideas that make a recount good.
My writing goal is to put more words and punctuation.
The ten things that make a recount good is things like punctuation adjectives and nouns, another thing that makes a recount good is telling the reader how you feel and how it happened when telling the reader about what happened and other stuff like adding punctuation and telling the teacher what you mean by adding more information.
-Punctuation
-Nouns,Adejectives,Onomatopoeia,Pronoun
-Different ideas in each paragraphs
-Telling the reader what happened
-When,what,who,why,how
-Spelling corrected
-Planning
-painting a picture for the readers mind
-focusing on work
-brainstorm about what your gonna write about your recount for some ideas
This story is a persuasive story to tell people if the environment is our responsibility, people may think that its not but I agree it is because can mother earth pick up rubbish by her self no she can't because shes been here keeping us people alive and all the things we give to her to thank is just rubbish being tiped inside her and around her, and this why we need to keep the earth clean.
The thing I found easy was to talk about how important mother earth is and why its important to clean the environment.
The thing I found hard was to notstop thinking about why the environment is so dirty and why people aren't picking it up.
The thing I found challenging was to think on what I was starting and what I wanted for the start of every slide.
Next time I will add more information because I know I can do better than putting in a little bit of words.
The thing I found easy was to think about what my obeject is and to decribe what it was and how it fells and also I found it easy to describe what it looks like and feels like.
The thing I found hard was to see how it smells and what I can hear because there was no sound to it and the was to smell to it.
The thing I found challenging was drawing the object because it had so many holes and bumps in it I couldn't draw bumps or holes.
Next time I will add a bit more words on my slides and choose and object that is more interesting than a war nut.
The thing I found easy was copy and pasting the work into the slide.
The thing I found hard was choosing part of the day is my favorite.
The thing I found challenging was what I do at night before I go to sleep.
I found it easy to consentrate on my work.
I found it hard to remember fit words in my writing.
I found it challenging to know so much things I do when it's night time.
Next time I will add more information about my writing.
