Thursday, November 21, 2019

Castle in the Distance.

Castle In Distance Brigde. There once was a old massive brigde that had a colorful color on it. It was flat like a flat piece of paper but fat. It looked strong and stable with a long walkway, heading towards a old castle. The brigde looked like it was growing long hair like its, long body. Castle The castle looked like a lonley home that someone probobly lived in. The tall lonley castle had little cracks in it like it was about to fall. It looked so mysterious liked no one went in because they thought it was haunted with rats creaking around and, squeking like its dieing. Its probobly abandonde because its been there for years and years. But suddenly I heard a thud then I knew something was following me thud there it goes again as I turned around there was nothing then again nah can’t be it can’t be haunted as the door opened and close I walked towards the creepy old door and opened it and looked around and the old door slamed, crek crek came a noise but it was a fat old rat, but then a ghost came running ahhh I said as I ran towards the green old grass. Ocean. The ocean looks like a calm water just laying still on its back. The ocean reminded me of a dirty and clean on each side. The water was bluey and greeny that looked like they were mixed togeather with liquid. The sea looked cold to swim in and calm witch made me want to swim in that warm, colorful and deep water. Sky. The sky looks like a wave of water flying throught the sky like a warm and calm ocean. The sky looks like a bunch of soft wavey cotton candy coming from god. The sky reminds me of a white and bluey color. When the clouds move they look like their going to form into something like an animals and things that fly around the sky looks like a blue ocean forming into a bright colorful blue. By Whare I found it easy to write because the writimg was the easyest part but the challenging part I found hard was knowing how to put it togeather.

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  2. Kia ora, Whare your story was quality and very long, i enjoyed it very much But you had a lot of spelling mistakes so that one way you can improve this amazing mahi! Keep it up.

    Kauri

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    1. kia ora ,Kauri thank you for the feedback I will try improve on my spelling

      Whare

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