This story is a persuasive story to tell people if the environment is our responsibility, people may think that its not but I agree it is because can mother earth pick up rubbish by her self no she can't because shes been here keeping us people alive and all the things we give to her to thank is just rubbish being tiped inside her and around her, and this why we need to keep the earth clean.
The thing I found easy was to talk about how important mother earth is and why its important to clean the environment.
The thing I found hard was to notstop thinking about why the environment is so dirty and why people aren't picking it up.
The thing I found challenging was to think on what I was starting and what I wanted for the start of every slide.
Next time I will add more information because I know I can do better than putting in a little bit of words.
Hello whare Im Tilly your writing buddy I really admire your writing because it explains alot I also like how your pictures relate to the subject you are writing about.I also like how long your stems are and there not rushed. mabe next time you could put a little bit more evdance in your great perswasive writing.your senserly Tilly
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