In team toroa we have been learning how to write an acrostic poem about guy fawkes, our teachers brang sparklers to school to help us get some ideas of what fireworks sound like smell like, when getting ideas from the sparklers I thought the sparkler was talking to me with a sizziling sound.
I found it easy to find a perfect word to make a poem with which was fireworks because I thought it would be great.
I found it hard to put exciting words into my poem because I had so much ideas to put in.
Next time I will add more detail to my poem and to my stems because theres not really alot to write about fireworks because its just people letting off fireworks.
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